Black Ghost

My brain hurts

I liked it but i think you should change the name of the story, it probably would draw more people into reading it.

IN THE FOREST OF EVIL MEN AND SUCH!

Hmmm...8/10 because its original

Thanks, Adam!

ok, ok, sorry I know this is stupid I guess I was just really bored, no one has to take it seriously. and black rose, why are you so uptight? ...

There once was a man who lived in a small cave. He had no shoes but that didn't matter since his supply of oranges was still on standby. He didn't ...

They have some on the other writing site: The Old, dumb, too smart for Yu-gi-oh writers association.

Thanks, guys. Ok, I now that ch. was kinda weird in some places, so I completely changed it, and made the whole chapter focus on Joe's and Molly's dialogue which ...

EXCUSE ME? That was totally out of line! WHAT the heck are you doing? THAT IS NOT HOW YOU REVIEW SOMETHING. Their is no profanity on YWS! Are you some ...

Granted, we had some fun times through the weeks we spent together Laughing at jokes that didn't make sense and making up stories to tell But I guess I wasn't ...

Do you think I need to add anything to this chapter?

How do you stand being so good at poetry? lol, I loved it.

thanks, I will try to replace "Lebanon" with different words in some parts of the poem

Lebanon You stand tall and unrivaled like the mighty cedars looking fear in the eye and never giving up Music hangs in the air on a Lebanese night As you ...